write a paragraph about a unique person you know. Use subject and object pronouns correctly ??

The person I admire is Juma'in Bon Jovi. He has a strange name because his father comes from Kremil, East Java and mother from Venice, Italy. A handsome man and loves to work hard yet romantic. That is why I love him. Every weekend Juma'in takes me out to candlelight dinner. The menu he ordered is always mutton steak, fried rice, carbonated drinks and sometimes wine.

After having a fantastic feast the next movement is having romantic smack down. He knows how to caress a woman like me. Oh, my goddess, Juma'in's hands are throbbing delightful, sending me to heaven.

Unfortunately that story vanished from my heart. Juma'in is no longer lingering around my life. He preferred to work in the North Pole, leaving me here in Asembagus forever. Every night my only partner is empty dreams and my own hands playing with myself.